I think that my work was average, but I have a lot of things to work to come with an impressive final performance. My friends and teacher gave me a lot of feedbacks and they have really pointed out the weaknesses in my routine, first off my biggest issue was my performance fluctuated throughout the performance, at first I was not very expressive but towards the end I started to be loud, I think that was because at first I was very nervous but as the routine went on I started to gain my confidence. The second critique was that I didn’t describe my objects properly, like I failed to show that a table was in front of me and I used all my objects from the table, plus when I left I didn’t quite express myself that I was upset.
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So I forgot what he did9ruzlan) can I come to school and talk to you about this.